きょうもまた、さまよい人の私は、ふいに竹やぶに迷い込みました。青い竹がむき出しの背骨のように伸びています。

 それは孤独なのに狭い村に密集している人々のようで恐ろしかったのです。まして、竹は根の部分で一つにつながれているという呪縛。竹はギシギシ、ミシミシときしみ、ざわざわ、ぞわぞわ小さな風に揺れるのです。

 萩原朔太郎の詞にこんなのなかっただろうか?と私は考えながら(注:面倒なので探しません)俳句を一つ詠みました。

  
       青竹や  背骨をさらし  震え立ち


 竹という植物は地球上の木とは違っていて、かぐや姫と一緒に月から来たという説もあります。しかも中が空洞なため食器にされたり、健康のため半分に割られ踏まれたりします。もう一句。


      悪しき人  月に変わりて  成敗す   
                             ばい  せーらーむーん




 もう一枚写真を撮りました。そして、小さな子供向けの童話を思いつきました。

 主人公は竹やぶで捨て猫を拾って帰り、枯れた竹の中で震えていたので「かぐや」と名付けました。毎日、子猫に会うため走って帰ります。
 そして、お前はカグヤだからとだっこすると足の間にチ〇コ発見!!!名前を変えなければ!!!で一句。


      竹やぶで  捨て猫ひろい  名は竹男


   
                          

    
       




 
   
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Re: すごい!です。

ありがとうございます。

 このコメントを励みにして、これからも生きていこうと思います。

URL | donnguri77 ID:-

竹を切って幼いかぐや姫を発見したら、大事に育てて妾にしますね。
夢は「一生に一度でいいからこの世のものでない美女を抱きたい」です。
腹上死しても本望ですよ(笑)

Re: タイトルなし

それで、お仕置きされるとこまでセットになってるんですかねえ。

  そんな得体の知れないもの、きほん拾いません。

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こんばんは^^

初めまして^^
面白い俳句を書きますね^^
『竹男』も面白いですが、自分は「竹は『かぐや姫』と共にやって来た、地球外の植物」という設定に、惹かれました^^

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Re: こんばんは^^

初めまして

 どこの流派にも所属していないのです。ヤツらは地球外生命体です。

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